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March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

I start in 4x6 or 3x5 . I recently bought six 3.5x5.5 that should work about as well. (Once the longhand writing gets me going, I switch to the .)

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
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Fried w/ , another that doesn't entirely work.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
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It's not fair, but I don't believe as amateur spy after she played action hero P.I.

"What do you mean Bree doesn't know how to fly a helicopter?"

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

The reward for best-selling stuff is making the most money, gaining the largest market share. Good for you.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

I've always preferred to , but I do appreciate saluting high quality work, which often isn't the most mainstream popular, best-selling work.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

Submit original, crime-themed poetry today and it could be published on my weekly site in April, U.S. : poemsoncrime.blogspot.com/p/gu

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

March 13-19 at my site , "Venom" by Charles Rammelkamp: poemsoncrime.blogspot.com/2023

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

Do have to put in grave danger to be exciting? W/ long-running , promises of grave danger ring false. If the best you can do to create excitement is put a long-running protagonist in grave danger, I don't know, kind of sad.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

I didn't like 's run as much as I might have. B/c the had , it felt like one long, excruciating movie instead of five.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

can drag story problems on longer than necessary, making action feel slow. I prefer mostly episodic structure w/ occasional two- and three-parters spicing things up.

March 13, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

I've tried the w/ a tied to my closet rod. That doesn't seem to work my as well as doing woodchoppers while standing on a band.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

I find people who complain about "getting " are looking for an excuse not to read them. A that doesn't somehow relate to real world events isn't as powerful as it could be.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

In other words, a story can show a character taking any number of actions. If the story doesn't go into the character's thought process, we don't know how to interpret those actions.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

We teach that and reveal . Ideally they do, but they can also mask and avoid the true , understandably if the characters don't want to antagonize each other or spend time that won't lead to a resolution.

To know whether actions reveal character, we have to know the thought, the intent behind the action. If we don't see that, we're lost.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

True , I think, lies deeper behind our and . Words attempt to express and resolve the conflict, but they often fall short. To learn what the true conflict is, you have to learn about ppl's relationships. How does one person see the other? Why? How do these perceptions influence their interaction?

March 12, 2023
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Shaula Evans
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I'm checking out a new show. It's not in English, so I have more patience that I would otherwise.

Most characters are shown bickering with family members: spouses fight, husbands are verbally abusive to wives, children backtalk parents. So far none of is relvant to the story. It's unpleasant.

Bickering is not conflict. Nor is it banter.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

example: 's is originally an ex-boxer turned legbreaker opposed to , an ex-boxer turned state cop and then P.I. Hawk was such an that, from his second appearance onward, he's been Spenser's staunch ally.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

Example: Arnold's is a killer android, but we're so attracted to his performance that Terminator 2 turns the android to good.

March 12, 2023
Gerald So
sogerald@masto.ai

is most on display when we're attracted to we normally wouldn't find attractive. The playing the character or the performance the actor gives in character pulls us in.

March 12, 2023